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1. under the wane, beneath Luna i stare
2. unto her smile which held eternity
3. a silhouette of two songbirds i see
4. they sing to me, the affection we share.

5. all of a sudden, it seemed so unfair
6. as i sat there under a willow tree
7. i felt a roadblock of ash and debris
8. and pondered the question, how could she care?

9. where once there was love that i felt so clear
10. all of it seemed to disolve in a flame
11. a sad sight like broken wings on a dove
12. past memories never fail to appear
13. and though it may never be quite the same
14. i feel that i always will be in love
©2008-2009 ~ManiacOnAisleThree
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my first sonnet

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:icongoddessofpeace:
this is the happy kind of depressing i love to feel all the time.. i think its amazing that you could actually put it into words.. : )

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happiness is a continuation of happenings which are not resisted- deepak chopra
:iconmaniaconaislethree:
thank you very much :) it really never wouldve happened if i hadnt been forced to write sonnets in lit class though lol
but i base almost all my poetry in the field of the L word

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"now that you're dead, what are you going to do with your life?"

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:icongoddessofpeace:
lol the L word.. thats a show isnt it?? :P and your welcome very much! when are you gonna post new stuff?? I really like reading your poetry!!!!
ha ha ha ha ha!!!! seriously ....

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happiness is a continuation of happenings which are not resisted- deepak chopra
:iconmaniaconaislethree:
lol i dont know, when i finish writing my new piece i'll put it up. but i dont get online as often as i'd like

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"now that you're dead, what are you going to do with your life?"

member of ~pretty-and-dangerous
:icongoddessofpeace:
you're never sleeping though.... *very confused look*

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happiness is a continuation of happenings which are not resisted- deepak chopra
:iconmaniaconaislethree:
well actually im sleeping more than i used to :D

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"now that you're dead, what are you going to do with your life?"

member of ~pretty-and-dangerous
:icongoddessofpeace:
really? Wow! So you're sleeping a full 5 minutes now huh? Lmao

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happiness is a continuation of happenings which are not resisted- deepak chopra

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